moka19 ([info]moka19) wrote,
@ 2005-07-11 22:23:00
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open the door

To Where Did You Say?
Originally uploaded by Pink Cloud.
I
come home
after work

I
read a memo
"Dear mommy"

I
wash dishes

I
have a drink
wathing TV
after taking
a bath

On the way
I go to the bed room
on the
second floor
the door
is left open

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[info]apc33
2005-07-19 04:39 am UTC (link)
Beautiful. I especially like the way this poessay paints the picture that the contemporary lifestyles of working parents cause children to be left on their own for many hours of the day. Maybe we all need to spend more time with our children instead of working so hard to maintain our material standard of living.

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hye
(Anonymous)
2006-07-05 01:36 pm UTC (link)
i think u just like to talk to ur own emosion..

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